Wednesday, February 21, 2007

Sin título (Dedicado a Ale).

Ale... mi mejor amiga, ya antes he escrito cosas acerca de tí en este espacio, y no sabes en verdad cómo me has ayudado a salir adelante a lo largo de estos años. ¿Te acuerdas de este cuento? Espero que sí, fue una pequeña forma de agradecerte todo lo que haces por mí y por todo lo que me has aguantado. Te quiero mucho. Originalmente este cuento era parte de otra de las tantas actividades complementarias de Publicidad II... Gracias también a la Srita. Profesora Lucero por dejarnos tan funcionales formas de catarsis... ¡Se le extraña! Octubre 31, 2006.
Hace no mucho tiempo, en el lejano país de “No pasa nada” vivía EL ciudadano, quien se encontraba profundamente obsesionado con aquella apetitosa “Manzana de Sodoma” que cada noche, surgida a través de su ventana se asomaba y le cantaba pasiones en un lenguaje encantado y largamente olvidado. Algunas noches EL ciudadano se incorporaba e intentaba tomar esta manzana y al no poder alcanzarla, se conformaba con imaginarse a él mismo teniendo a la manzana como su posesión, pasearla entre sus dedos, disfrutarla, morderla y devorarla a placer.

Al mismo tiempo, EL ciudadano tenía un maniquí escondido en su clóset y con el cual constantemente se desahogaba y le contaba todo lo referente a sus constantes desazones producidas por la manzana, mientras que el maniquí (llamado Dita) paciente le escuchaba día tras día y noche tras noche. Precisamente en una de esas típicas noches la manzana llamó como de costumbre al ciudadano y éste, al prepararse para finalmente probar el prohibido y jugoso interior de ese fruto que tanto lo carcomía, tuvo un presentimiento de último minuto y decidió asomarse a su ventana, ¡Cuál sería su sorpresa al ver que la manzana no estaba! Y lo peor es que aún podía escuchar sus engañosos cánticos. Tremendamente decepcionado se levantó y comenzó a destrozar su cuarto, después abrió una caja de cereal rancio (su droga favorita) y comió hasta hartarse y quedar dormido.

Cuando despertó sintió algo frío en su hombro: el maniquí había caído pero su mano había quedado apoyado en un interesante acto retroalimentativo de tacto, por lo que EL ciudadano se apresuró a levantarlo y a limpiarlo; le dio un cálido beso en su frente y, después de limpiarlo y agradecerle profundamente todo lo que por él había hecho y aguantado, salió de su casa pensando en lo afortunado que era de tener a Dita y también en el como podría corresponder tan desinteresado y amistoso cariño.

Las noches siguen llegando, EL ciudadano aún ve y escucha a la manzana (La cual todavía le canta acerca del amor y del perdón) pero él se mantiene con la tranquilidad y la certidumbre de que no está sólo ya que, cuando estos sentimientos negativos vuelven a aflorar en él, lo único que hace es voltear hacia su clóset y se reconforta el ver a Dita en el mismo lugar y en la posición de siempre, y a la vez está a la expectativa de que algún día ella también le pida que lo escuche… Sabe que si algún día ve que una lágrima corriese por su rostro, no dudaría en limpiarla al instante.

Fin.

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Amigo neta mil gracias!!! me encanta, de verdad admiro tu forma de escribir por favor nunca lo dejes de hacer!!! sabes q aquí tienes a una amiga q te quiere mucho besos ale.

26 February, 2007 20:39  
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Amigo neta mil gracias!!! me encanta, de verdad admiro tu forma de escribir por favor nunca lo dejes de hacer!!! sabes q aquí tienes a una amiga q te quiere mucho besos ale.

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